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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 37 |
Jun 17 |
Reply |
I tried to fix up the light on her face, but don't have the skills. If you zoom in its a complicated problem, almost burned out. Somewhere my title disappeared, it was supposed to be " A Funny Story ". |
Jun 22nd |
| 37 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Great pose, really sharp subject. The lighting has rendered the colours exactly right I suspect, the same greys as the Blue Heron we have locally.........The water is a bit messy, but you could take some off the foreground. The background stuff is out of focus, which is fine. The white feathers catch the eye, but could be removed.......One detail I always go back to is the two white dots on the raised leg, do you know what they are? |
Jun 22nd |
| 37 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
The variety of textures and shapes makes an interesting study, lots of detail to explore. Even though the hues are similar in the building, the contrast between the sheet metal and layers of concrete look good. I like the small window and big door.......But I keep turning my head 45 degrees to the left so that I can see the building mostly level. And the puddle bottom right is distracting.......It is still intriguing though. |
Jun 22nd |
| 37 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Very nice, sharp. The colours in the orangs look just right. The little one having a straw in its mouth is a bonus. Super cute baby........I think you could crop a bit off the right, to the mother's arm. Also tone down the white wall a bit more. |
Jun 22nd |
| 37 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
I like this, the greens, yellows and blues have a different tonality when filtered by the fog. The composition works, there is an open line of space between the taller trees that leads us into the centre.........You could consider cropping off more white sky, almost to the trees, it doesn't add to the image. |
Jun 21st |
| 37 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
The light of the moon is certainly different, the shadows come from a different angle and the intensity is subdued. I do like the mountain and the amount you decided to include........I think there is a bit too much cloud, the mountain could be a little more dominant. |
Jun 21st |
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