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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 31 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
El;la - the lighting on the eggs is absolutely divine - so well controlled - great job! However I do find that the bright area of the cloth(?)draws my eye away from the main elements of the image and reducing the brightness in this area would be beneficial IMO. |
Jun 14th |
| 31 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
Paul - another strong portrait with a great pose, well positioned in the frame and atmospheric. DOF is very shallow almost too shallow?- maybe another stop down? |
Jun 14th |
| 31 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
Ed - this image is all about light plus shape and form. I agree with Michael re. the Ansel Adam's touch! |
Jun 14th |
| 31 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
Michael - a really powerful set of clouds rightly taking centre stage in the image and enhanced by the use of infrared. I feel that a little more foreground would have been beneficial and I find the isolated finger of white cloud on the right hand side distracting - I would have cloned that out! There is another small area of white cloud immediately opposite on the left hand side right on the edge of the image which IMHO would benefit from darkening down.
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Jun 14th |
| 31 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
Ian - a well spotted image in which I like the way in which the guy's legs are mirrored by those of the cranes. Whilst appreciating that this was a grab shot I think that had you moved a little to the right his head would have been in the space between the cranes. That said you have captured the feeling of the day admirably. |
Jun 14th |
| 31 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
John - a well considered composition which is nicely balanced. I do like the 'rim' lighting on the ice and do agree with Ella that a tad more contrast would be beneficial. Well spotted!
A very minor nit pick - in the top left corner the periphery of that piece of ice is just cut off and the continuation of the 'rim' light is lost. |
Jun 14th |
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