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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
I had considered removing the orange color, butI left it in to compliment the red blouse, also, because things in real life are not always perfect. Perhaps this helps. |
Oct 14th |
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| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Even if we cannot consider this as 'street photography', I am glad you shared it with us. This is one of the most pleasing pictures I have seen in a long time. Each individual compliments the other and gal without a cap created the focal point.
I like the bluish tone, which I think compliments the weather conditions and how everyone is dressed. I am only disturbed by the appearance of the group being boxed in. As in the original, the extra space around them, gives a nice feeling of open-spaces. Also, I must say that your 13Pro and your Snapseed did a beautiful job.
I may be wrong, but it appears that cell phones within their short life-span, are getting an upper hand over the seasoned camera manufacturers. |
Oct 14th |
| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Or this version. |
Oct 11th |
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| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Excellent conversion Jerry. It all blends in beautifully. I especially like the ruggedness of the artist, which blends beautifully with all the surroundings around him. I would like o see the guitar case more to the right, but it is what it is and I do not see anything that would improve the composition. |
Oct 11th |
| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
What orange hat Jerry? |
Oct 11th |
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| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
To my estimate, this also will meet the requirements of the assignment. But as you say, the contrast is overpowering. This is the kind of picture that needs a graduated filter. Did you go on the other side and take a picture of the expression on the child's face? I bet there was no contrast there. |
Oct 9th |
| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Yes, Al, I am sure you meet the requirements of the assignment. I am not bothered by the effect that Mike mentions, but I sure would love to see a picture of the expressions on the faces of all those people. |
Oct 9th |
| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
I agree with the composition and the cropping. I think you can improve on this story-telling image to make the figure stand out more by darkening the boardwalk and the fencing. Also you can easily eliminate the distracting electric wires and poles by cloning parts of the available trees over them. |
Oct 9th |
| 22 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Yes, this is a great idea, but one that I am sure you can improve on. I know you can.
Sorry, but the image is still leaning to the left a bit. Two, I would try to find an angle that would eliminate the building on the right or just clone it out. Three, the silver pole at the top can be removed with the help of the 'patience tool' or Content-Aware.
Four, the dark reflection could be brightened and the bright reflection darkened some. Five, I am sure you tried (and I do not know if it is possible, but) could there be an angle that would make the building stand out more in the reflection? Do not laugh, but could a step leader help?... (I asked not to laugh.) I am sure the Bean can provide countless opportunities. |
Oct 9th |
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