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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Oct 21 |
Reply |
Al, Peggy & Jerry, you have made valid points and I have tried to make some improvements. See what you think.
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Oct 12th |
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| 22 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Excellent capture and recomposition of this image. Diagonal lines towards the right always create more drama. In this case it emphasizes the power of the Thunderbirds. I agree with Al on cropping a bit from the bottom or at lest compose in a way that will avoid the left contrail coming out of the left corner. Can you recapture the beautiful blue sky tones of the original? |
Oct 10th |
| 22 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
I too like tree parts and bark and I love the texture of this wood.
I see an alligator head at top left, a sward fish middle left and a chicken head bottom left. All three have eyes. |
Oct 7th |
| 22 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Yes! The subject, warm tones and composition, all say: "Fall". I think that a little more cropping from the right would help the composition. |
Oct 4th |
| 22 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
This is a lovely fall scene and colors.It has a nice flow from foreground to background and into the clouds and sky. To avoid the center look, perhaps you can crop a bit from the right side. |
Oct 4th |
| 22 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Kaylyn, I think that your treatment of Topaz Studio 2 works perfectly with this picture, however, I also think that it is worth to take the time to clean up the electronic waves from the boy's back, shoulders and hair. This would give the appearance that the boy is not effected by the electronic waves he has walked into. |
Oct 4th |
| 22 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Yes, these goof off shots invoke some emotion and yet what to do with them? The only place that my eye rests on is the third top left quarter of the composition, but is it sufficient to hold the interest? Without the clouds, the confetti could possibly be used as an overlay, but as it is I would use it to create some kind of abstract. I may get back to you on this. Yet, do not be surprised if someone say: "This is wonderful, I want to buy it". |
Oct 3rd |
6 comments - 1 reply for Group 22
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| 83 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Excellent, simple and effective!!! Very well done. |
Oct 7th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 83
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7 comments - 1 reply Total
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