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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Reply |
Yes Stephen, you are correct, the wall curves and slopes down with the flow of the street. Thank you. |
Jul 26th |
| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Reply |
That is what next month is for Kaylyn. |
Jul 20th |
| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Reply |
Okay Al, I thought I would try your idea, just to see how it would look. Yes, the flower pots are strong, but they are there. Without them, I think the picture is a bit static. See what you think.
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Jul 14th |
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| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Lovely composition Kaylyn, although I think you could have captured a few more inches on the right, which would show more of the beautiful clouds. I agree with Jerry on the way the clouds design point to the direction of the tree. I also think that a little brightening would liven the scene a great deal. |
Jul 12th |
| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Yes Jerry, nicely done. I love especially the color tones in the feathers as well as the sharpness. I think we can improve a bit by cropping a little more from the left and bottom, to takes the eye to the head of the bird faster. I also brightened the head of the bird a bit and sharpened the eye a little. Does it help? |
Jul 12th |
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| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Al, you have an excellent image here and you have done an excellent job. I have no problem with the background, but from all the comments, you may consider improving on what you have done. I believe that Ps. has a way of showing motion in the propellers. Also, you can easily remove the top of heads and create more room at the bottom. |
Jul 9th |
| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
Very pleasing image, as it was already mentioned. I also notice the beautiful S curve design on the ground, which compliments the action of the boy and water. Your processing, however, is what makes this picture. |
Jul 9th |
| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
I agree with Jerry's sentiments, which I do not think I could express as clearly. In addition to that, I would consider pumping up the colors of the rainbow a bit, to give the rainbow a bit more dominance. |
Jul 9th |
| 22 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
The framing through the entryway, created a lovely perspective and depth of field. I also love how you included the flower pots, further creating positive depth of field and a second element to compliment the subject. Perhaps you may consider removing 'Exhibit Room', which I find distracting and kind of unrelated. |
Jul 9th |
6 comments - 3 replies for Group 22
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| 29 |
Jul 21 |
Comment |
I also love mirror designs and this one is one of the best. It also works well as a vertical. I would also like to see it with a smaller center. |
Jul 16th |
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1 comment - 0 replies for Group 29
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7 comments - 3 replies Total
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