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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 21 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Yes, this is a beautiful creative idea, but I ask, how come no one is disturbed by the bright petal on the bottom, which is more disturbing than the bar on the right?
I would think that a little rearrangement would eliminate the problem. |
Sep 26th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 21
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| 22 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
This is a beautiful location and one that can be explored in many ways. Straight lines are considered to be static. It does not appear that you were restrictions as to where to stand. A few yards to the left, would have given you nice diagonal lines, leading the eye to a cluster of trees and the background. Hope you have other compositions and/or you have access to this location. |
Sep 26th |
| 22 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
My feeling is the same as the others. In this kind of picture, you need to see the original scene, the painting and the artist. Unfortunately here, the painter overpowers the other two, but then, I do not know what restrictions you had as to where to stand.
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Sep 26th |
| 22 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I am sorry I was not able to find a better image to express my idea, but perhaps I will in the future. You are all in sync with our comments. Yes, the empty area can be filled in, but cropping the line at the bottom, would leave the tree standing on air and I wanted to show you some base to support the tree. Unfortunately, it was part of the pool edge. |
Sep 26th |
| 22 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Yellow cast or washed out look, this gives me a nostalgic feeling of the old west. However, I think you overcropped the right side. As it is, the mine is sitting there all alone, but if you connect it to the peak of the mountain on the right, then you have a nice triangle connection between the mountain on the left, the mine and the peak on the right.
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Sep 26th |
| 22 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Yes, I too agree with the others. This was good seeing and good post-manipulation, especially the lower left corner, as Mike said.
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Sep 26th |
| 22 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Ditto on all that has been said, however, I feel that the left side of the foliage is more of a leading line to the towers and that by cropping 50% of the foliage on the right, would create a more pleasing composition. |
Sep 26th |
| 22 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Fungi of different shapes and color, always make beautiful abstracts. At times the under part could be abstract as well. I feel that the darkness works well here to make the Fungi stand out. |
Sep 26th |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 22
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8 comments - 0 replies Total
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