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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Nov 18 |
Comment |
Kaylynn, I love your creative and outside-of-the-box thinking. Marti is correct, you get the award. As for showing water on the bags, perhaps sprinkling droplets on the bags would help or placing a clear sheet of glass over the bags, with droplets on the glass. |
Nov 23rd |
| 22 |
Nov 18 |
Comment |
Again, lovely color tones, but pictorially, I do not find a flower or combination of flowers as the focal point. there are too many distractions. John's cropping helps a bit. If you like these kid of pictures, at times they can be very effective if taken on a windy day and with a slow shutter speed.
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Nov 23rd |
| 22 |
Nov 18 |
Comment |
Okay, just to show you that I aims to please, I have made some changes I hope you like, but I must confess that I feel that some of the reality is gone. |
Nov 23rd |
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| 22 |
Nov 18 |
Comment |
Well done John. The flower stands out very nicely. The tiny sparkles in the water provide a nice separation. Yes, the yellow leaf is distracting, but this is nature and that is the reality of nature and it also compliments the yellow of the flower. I feel that a little cropping from the top and right side would unite and improve the image.
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Nov 23rd |
| 22 |
Nov 18 |
Comment |
This is also a beautiful scene with pleasing and complimentary color tones. I especially like the similarity between the clouds and the leaves on the water. I often find that the combination of reflections and reality, is very effective. |
Nov 23rd |
| 22 |
Nov 18 |
Comment |
Marti, this is a beautiful scene and it has beautiful color tones. However, I cannot rest my eye on one side or the other. Peggy's and John's cropping has helped a great deal.
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Nov 23rd |
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