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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Love the revised image of the bear; it is clear, engaging, and intriguing! Best wishes for a great competition! |
Aug 30th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
This is my reworked version of the image. |
Aug 30th |
 |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I agree and thank you! |
Aug 15th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
The monochrome is interesting but I like the color - for some reason in color the path to the second bridge is more engaging. In the monochrome version the second bridge is less a part or the subject and more a part of the background. |
Aug 15th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
This a wonderful capture and thanks for the storytelling on the dew drops! I agree with Jim - reducing the brightness enhances the focus on the subject. Great job! |
Aug 15th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I like both the crop and focus on the rider. I have no suggestions to add. |
Aug 15th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I think I prefer the subject focused on the horses. It is the sculpture that caught your eye. It is not clear to me what story is being told with the girl. In color or black and white I would crop the girl out. For me she distracts from my concentration on the majestic form of the sculpture. |
Aug 15th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I like the new composition…though I didn't find the original composition background a distraction but rather part of the surrounding that the buds evolved from. Is it possible to achieve a similar effect by increased blurring of the background while increasing sharpness of the buds? |
Aug 15th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I'm amazed at the improved clarity of the composition from the original to monochrome. I especially like the blur in the background contrast to the sharper foreground. I wonder if the same was done in the original composition if it would have the same effect on the subject? Nevertheless the monochrome is well done. Good luck in competition! |
Aug 15th |
| 78 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I like this composition as well. Thanks! |
Aug 10th |
10 comments - 0 replies for Group 78
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| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Noted and thanks! |
Aug 18th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Noted and thanks! |
Aug 17th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I echo everyone on the amazing job you did with the moth… but your second post engaged me more with the beauty of your original subjects - the flowers…can't wait until you share more of their stunning beauty. |
Aug 15th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Such a creative capture and composition! Thank you for the explanation of how it was achieved. I have no suggestions to add. |
Aug 15th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I like the composition. You asked for feedback on the sun in the background- I do think it's distracting - it's hidden and not apparent that it is the sun. To me it does not add to the composition as the intensity of the light unevenly surrounds the building leaving me to wonder what and why is it there. |
Aug 15th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I love the composition with all eyes on the busy bee ðŸ I honestly have not viewed the sharpness, clarity and detail of a bee as shown here. I don't have any suggestions to add. |
Aug 15th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I am drawn to doors as subjects- they metaphorically represent transitions to new or old transformations. I think just the door by itself would make an interesting story - more cropping of everything else out. For me, the surroundings of the door are distractions from the raw beauty of this stately gateway. |
Aug 15th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I love what you have done with the composition and the editing. I agree that the sharpness of the blades of grass works best in the portrait storytelling of the subject - the moose is majestic in its natural environment. The vignette works well to enhance focusing the subject. |
Aug 15th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Reply |
Thank you Janet |
Aug 15th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Reply |
Thank you Kurt.... I am trying to improve. |
Aug 10th |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I like both compositions... they tell different stories. |
Aug 8th |
 |
| 81 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I love the cropped image with focus on the fruit. Thanks! |
Aug 8th |
10 comments - 2 replies for Group 81
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20 comments - 2 replies Total
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