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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 49 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
Hi Alan,
This is an intriguing capture! The unusual angle definitely grabs attention and adds an interesting perspective. While the orientation might initially confuse the viewer, I find that it also encourages a deeper exploration of the photo, thereby adding an element of discovery.
I appreciate that you presented the scene as you found it in nature, this gives the image a sense of authenticity. The detail on the bee and the flower's pistil is impressive, and the soft focus on the rest of the flower nicely emphasizes the main subject.
I do see why Craig and David suggested flipping the image, it can make for an easier visual read. But art is subjective and your choice of preserving the original orientation contributes to the image's unique charm.
The processing and tones you've applied to the image have enhanced its natural beauty without overpowering it. It adds a touch of nostalgia and I can see why Josh associated it with images from nature shows.
Overall, it's a captivating photograph that invites viewers to see the world from a fresh angle. Thanks for sharing!
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Jul 30th |
| 49 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
Hi David,
This is a fantastic capture! The windsurfer with the red sail stands out beautifully against the serene backdrop of Lake Como.
I agree with Josh that the sky isn't detracting from the image. While it might not be dramatic, it provides a calm counterbalance to the vibrant energy of the windsurfer. Moreover, the subtle gradient adds depth to the sky. Sky replacement could alter the natural ambiance of the scene which you've captured so well.
Alan's point on dehazing could bring out more details in the sky, but it's a delicate process to ensure it doesn't overpower the rest of the image.
As for the cropping, I echo Craig and Alan's suggestion for a tighter crop to emphasize the windsurfer. But be cautious not to lose too much of the captivating landscape that gives the photo its sense of scale and context.
In terms of composition, the windsurfer placed on an intersection of thirds could create a dynamic balance.
Your instincts about the image have served you well so far. It's an evocative capture that invokes a sense of freedom and tranquility. Thanks for sharing it with us! |
Jul 30th |
| 49 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
Hi Josh,
What an extraordinary image you've captured! The effusion of colors is truly mesmerizing and the abstract nature keeps the viewer engaged as they try to decipher the subject - a rose.
As Craig and David mentioned, it's almost hard to believe that this image is not the product of special techniques but simply a testament to your creative use of a vibrant subject.
The focus point, as brought up by David and Alan, could indeed use a bit of enhancement, potentially via focus stacking to increase the depth of field. Your use of a macro lens and proximity to the subject seems to have created a more shallow depth than expected, but it's intriguing to see this effect in action.
However, these aspects don't detract from the visual experience but rather, add to the ethereal nature of the image. It is a wonderful depiction of how photography can transform everyday objects into striking pieces of art.
Thanks for sharing and stirring our imaginations! |
Jul 30th |
| 49 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
Craig,
You've captured a delightful image here. The balance of red hues, from the model's dress to her hair, gives the photograph a warm and inviting feeling. The pose and the model herself are certainly intriguing.
I agree with David and Josh about the slight content-aware artifacts on the right, but it's something that is not readily noticeable and your explanation about the Photoshop Beta fill feature is illuminating. It's great to learn about these new tools and techniques from each other's experiences.
The depth of field advice from David is something to consider for future shots, though I believe at f5.6, you had a decent depth that you were aiming for. The background could be blurrier, indeed, to create more emphasis on the model, but it's always a delicate balance to strike depending on the context and the mood of the shot.
Overall, it's an impressive composition. Thanks for sharing and inspiring! |
Jul 30th |
| 49 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
Craig, David, and Josh,
I really appreciate you all taking the time to review and comment on my submission this month. Your insights and feedback are always so valuable.
Craig, thank you for the technical advice on focus. I can see how the photo would have benefitted from a sharper focus on the face, particularly the eyes. I will certainly take your suggestions onboard for future shots. I'm exploring new cameras currently, so I'll look out for those with the AI eye-focus feature you mentioned. In the meantime, I'll experiment with manual focus and aperture adjustments.
David, thanks for your keen eye on the cropping! The triangle in the lower right didn't occur to me until you pointed it out, but now I can see how it might detract from the subject. I'll also look into using Topaz Sharpen AI for refining the soft focus - I appreciate the recommendation.
And Josh, I'm glad you enjoyed the expression I captured! I aim to make my work engaging, even in the thumbnail view, so your feedback is very reassuring.
Your thoughtful critiques are genuinely improving my craft and I can't wait to apply these suggestions to my next photo shoot. This exchange of ideas and techniques is what I value the most in our group studies.
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