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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 40 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Good to catch the horse and the sky. The horse has a nice posture but perhaps would be better without the leaf over its ear. There are a couple of grass stems, one over the rear leg and another at the bottom which could be cloned out. I agree with Julie that it's a touch dark and could be lightened without losing the attractive sky. Also, I think the magenta/green and warmth balance could be improved. Sounds a lot but all do-able. |
Jun 17th |
| 40 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
And reduce orange and yellow |
Jun 17th |
| 40 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Interesting travel shot. I agree that the left hand side is less interesting. Also the orange balcony and the yellow fence could be toned down. I took the liberty of altering your image in LR - straightened, +auto WB, +dehaze, +texture, darken highlights, slight crop. What do you think? |
Jun 17th |
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| 40 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Interesting and striking picture - good interaction between the tourists and the street seller. Nice post processing - the original was a bit busy.
I agree the level of editing is not allowed in a PJ/PT but it's good as a memory of your trip. There are a couple of light spots on the right hand side which I would be tempted to clone out. |
Jun 17th |
| 40 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
The West coast is dotted with these lighthouses, I recall visiting the one at Cape Meares during the Portland OR conference. Very scenic.
I like the open door. I think I would have liked to have seen more of the surroundings, perhaps taken a bit further back and from lower down to emphasis the height. Also in colour. |
Jun 17th |
| 40 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
I like the idea. Only comments are you are a perhaps bit close into the vase and I would have liked a bit more space round it. The vase looks like it is floating so a bit of shadow in the original would have helped there. |
Jun 15th |
| 40 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
The black chandelier does look a bit strange as it has 6 "arms" and the ceiling has 8. I don't think you were exactly shooting from right underneath the roof hub but very slightly to one side. In a club competition it is usually expected there to be as much above as below the centre and left Vs right and it doesn't quite achieve this. I think I prefer the coloured version but that's just me. |
Jun 15th |
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