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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I think your treatment has certainly made something special from the original - very eye catching. I don't think I can suggest anything to improve it. |
Aug 20th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 34
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| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Lots of exhibition quality pictures taken with a mobile phone these days - the quality has improved so much. |
Aug 30th |
| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Reply |
Yes, a good suggestion to go back later when the weather is different like after snow. |
Aug 30th |
| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Reply |
that is what I meant but it is not a deal breaker. Overall this is great shot, certainly "one for the wall" a phrase I hate but you know what I mean. |
Aug 30th |
| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Thanks for all your comments. My feeling is that the prominent mast and stay on the right hand side is unattractive and would be better removed. IIRC it was a full vertical sweep starting at the bottom. I will try a small sweep next time. I rarely carry a tripod though, but thanks for the idea. Personally I would like to retain the sky, not sure about the red building on the right but thanks for the suggestion.
Everyone does ICM with trees, unfortunately no trees in Hull's Boat Marina! |
Aug 30th |
| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Yes the crane adds interest and you've caught the scene with nice clouds too. I think just lightening the shadow areas and perhaps adding a but of dehaze would also work. |
Aug 12th |
| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
You've caught the "blue hour" so a nice sky. A nice memory of Bruges (I don't think we've been there in the evening). I tend to agree with Don - a bit too much empty water and sky but nice reflections. I wondered about simplifying by removing most of the left hand side too (but I tend to crop too much) |
Aug 12th |
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| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I think as a "record" shot it shouldn't have converging verticals (because the camera was slighty tilted up). I have taken the liberty of altering that, increased the contrast, added a bit of vibrance, lightened the shadows. Everyone does it differently! I prefer it in colour but I like Don's mono version |
Aug 12th |
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| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
I assume you didn't have a longer lens? The treatment has produced a very dramatic shot. I think the crop is fine. I think black and White is better than colour here. My only suggestion would be to straighten up the verticals which to my eye are slightly out |
Aug 12th |
| 40 |
Aug 24 |
Comment |
Nice capture. Good to see your post editing details too. My only suggestion (which is trivial) would be to crop a touch off the right hand side. |
Aug 12th |
7 comments - 2 replies for Group 40
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8 comments - 2 replies Total
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