Activity for User 311 - Andrew Hersom - andrewhersom@gmail.com

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18 Dec 21 Comment Personally I would crop to remove the sky, almost going for a square format (but everyone says I crop too tight). It would get the face on a "third" too. Dec 17th
18 Dec 21 Comment I really like the industrial works in the centre - very well captured. Personally I am not a fan of IR either but it's been well done. Perhaps could do with a more contrast? Dec 17th
18 Dec 21 Comment Nice bombo; my feeling one could lose some of the dark grey cloud at the bottom. What do you think? Dec 17th
18 Dec 21 Comment :) Dec 17th
18 Dec 21 Comment Very effective graphic image. I am not a fan of the border though - sorry.
It also works in black and white (and rotated 90 deg), I think.		 Dec 17th
18 Dec 21 Comment Thanks for the comments, I wondered about the red bits also the bright light-coloured splodges in the trees on the right hand side. Dec 13th
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40 Dec 21 Comment I don't have it. Dec 29th
40 Dec 21 Reply So easy to get rushed and miss things, there is never enough time or one can get crowded. Did you get any other shots> Dec 20th
40 Dec 21 Comment Nicely seen abstract opportunity. Possibly too wide a view - what is the main point viewers will be looking at?

This is all personal but to me the colours look a bit flat and underexposed. I have lightened by about a stop, applied auto WB. added a bit of dehaze and intensified orange slider. Also as others have suggested cropped a bit. I think this is better, what do you think?
It's always good to go round the image edges and make sure there aren't any light spots there as these can catch the eye.

Dec 16th
40 Dec 21 Comment Great capture which really gives the feel of the party. The light effects of the bubble and fog machine are very good. I think you have made the best crop of the original image. My only suggestion would be to clone out the spot on the eye of the woman on the right hand side which catches the eye too much. Dec 16th
40 Dec 21 Comment Interesting sculpture, well worth the time spent on photographing it. I think you could have cloned out some of the background to simplify this and perhaps go for a wider crop. Your current crop could be improved by cloning out the two lines on the concrete which catch the eye too much; there is also a scratch on the steel at the bottom which would benefit from removal. Nicely seen. Dec 16th
40 Dec 21 Comment Good to take your camera and attempt to record this show. The background gives the feeling of what the exhibition was like but the onlookers could have been captured better in my opinion. The couple on the right have their back to you, they overlap figures beyond them. The youth playing with his phone has a awkward posture and overlaps a couple behind him. There is someone on the left hand side looking out of the picture. So it is all a bit confused and haphazard. A shot taken a pace of two to your left might have worked better and, if possible, when the youth in the centre had perhaps moved. Maybe also better to remove the bottom left hand corner dark patch and clone out the line across the floor. The camera is slightly pointed down as the mirrors are keystoned. Sorry to be so negative. Dec 16th
40 Dec 21 Comment This is a fun picture and it works well, I don't have anything I would want to change. A picture which could be used on a card. Good job. Dec 16th
40 Dec 21 Comment The horizon is perhaps a bit prominent. I could tone it down a bit, what do you think? Dec 13th
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