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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
1 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
This is a really interesting image. Almost black and white. Very sinister. I quite like Dennis' version but it is quite different. I think it needs the wide angle view otherwise the context is gone. Great shot. |
Sep 26th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 1
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18 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Really nice effect and thanks for your explanation on how you did it. Nothing to add. |
Sep 24th |
18 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Agree with the other comments. Yes, works well |
Sep 24th |
18 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Very creative geometric shapes which I cannot add to. Nice |
Sep 24th |
18 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Nice treatment which works well. Yes, I like the partially processed version better. |
Sep 24th |
4 comments - 0 replies for Group 18
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27 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Great shot, nicely taken and I wouldn't change a thing. Really says it all. |
Sep 26th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 27
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40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Thanks I'll bear it in mind. Need to go back when gas is freely available again. |
Sep 30th |
40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I feel I maybe losing some context with a tighter crop. Another picture but a messy background |
Sep 26th |
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40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Nice starscape. I think it is a pity that the city lighting is still so prominent. At 21s you are starting to see movement and I wondered if you might have done better with your wide angle lens wide open to give you a shorter exposure. |
Sep 24th |
40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
This is a really good shot, well done. Lots of possibilities for different crops, some better than others, but all good. I did wonder if it might be better lightened a touch but that is a matter for personal preference. |
Sep 24th |
40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Nice original but this is a tricky one and there is no "right" or "correct" crop for this image. There is less of interest on the right hand side and I quite like Alison's crop. I think highlighting the green plant to the right of the door might be something to work on (ie wack up the green).
In the end I think your version is a good one and not sure there is much to improve on. Nice to see subjects like this captured, they will be gone a a few years. |
Sep 24th |
40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Tricky to capture this. My feeling is might be better to remove the white bits the foliage in the top right. Also perhaps just to hone in on the five women and delete the drummer altogether. |
Sep 24th |
40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I agree with Don's straightening.
As an Abstract it's OK but I wondered if it might work better with a bit off the top and and a touch more contrast. What do you think? |
Sep 24th |
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40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
It's an interesting experimental shot but it doesn't quite cut it for me. I think the "shot through the window concept" is OK but perhaps needs a single subject like someone doing something (wearing bright colours to stand out) rather than a truck. Text always catches the eye and that on the truck is reversed which is a bit confusing. So, good try but well worth a revisit to do better. Sorry to be so negative. |
Sep 21st |
40 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Thanks for the nice words.
I should add that I've put this into a couple of exhibitions but got "nul points", so what do I need to do to make it better? |
Sep 7th |
9 comments - 0 replies for Group 40
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42 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
A really interesting image, I agree with Stuart's crop. Might suggest an increase in vibrance but good record shot. |
Sep 26th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 42
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16 comments - 0 replies Total
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