Activity for User 311 - Andrew Hersom - andrewhersom@gmail.com

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18 Aug 21 Comment A definite improvement on the original. Good job. Aug 15th
18 Aug 21 Comment Well done, very imaginative. I like this a lot and it has given me some ideas. I have nothing to add. Aug 15th
18 Aug 21 Comment Very innovative. I don't mind the triple butterflies being the same at all but maybe David has a point. Good effort. Aug 15th
18 Aug 21 Comment Thanks for the comments. I am looking at adding some space at the left hand side and also taking on board Ian's comments. Aug 15th
18 Aug 21 Comment This is a really neat treatment which is most attractive. My only criticism is the frame which I find a bit obtrusive - but apart from that I have nothing sensible to add. Aug 15th
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40 Aug 21 Reply I like this better Aug 19th
40 Aug 21 Comment I wondered if it was more a barn than a cabin to live in - can one see through the gaps between the logs?
Interesting image, well done capturing it. Overall it looks a bit soft to me - was it taken from some distance away with a long lens? It might have been a better view taken some way to the right to get more of the pitched roof.
The colours are great, but I agree with Don that they could be improved with some slider work.
There is a nice image of a cabin and autumnal leaves on page 5 of August's PSA Journal - worth a look. 		Aug 17th
40 Aug 21 Comment A nice memory of your trip but there is a lot of black tree trunks and branches blocking the view of the lake. The lake itself is a nice colour with interesting ripples but the trees prevent me from the seeing it properly. Although you used a wide(ish) angle lens the tops of the trees are missing. I wonder if a better view would have been obtained if you had got down closer to the edge of the lake so there was less tree obstructing the view. Aug 17th
40 Aug 21 Comment Nice scene but I think it would have been better to catch the "blue hour" maybe just with the sun appearing on the horizon. Perhaps easier to go back and re-shoot if that is an option. Aug 17th
40 Aug 21 Comment You've certainly produced a striking image with good colours. Personally I would clone out the paper cup and the leaf under the back wheel which catches my eye too much. Aug 17th
40 Aug 21 Comment A strong image and nice to see it - very graphic.
This is a personal preference but I think that the image is a bit "overcooked" and the subtle tones of the original have been lost. I can't comment on Luminar but Alison's suggestion is worth a go (although I do most of my editing using LR).
I think it would gain by having the white highlights on the circular lamp for example toned down.
My other thought is whether this is really sharp? Maybe a reflection of the camera (although I know some people very happy with Pany compacts) and you have to use the camera you have with you. 		Aug 17th
40 Aug 21 Comment Worth a Try? Aug 9th
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