Activity for User 311 - Andrew Hersom - andrewhersom@gmail.com

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18 Mar 20 Comment I agree with Mark - it would work better with a more blurred background. Mar 15th
18 Mar 20 Comment Novel. I feel better if it was "facing" towards the camera rather than to the left. Mar 15th
18 Mar 20 Comment Nice effect especially in the backgound. I don't much like the immediate foreground though - all those twigs detract for me. Maybe just crop it off. Mar 15th
18 Mar 20 Comment Neat. Good Job. Mar 15th
18 Mar 20 Comment Good effect and nice treatment. I would be temped to darken the very light patches at the top right of the window surround. Good shot. Mar 15th
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40 Mar 20 Comment It is difficult with eyes, as you mention, as the brows cause such dark shadows. Mar 15th
40 Mar 20 Comment Nice atmospheric shot - gives a real feel of the location. I agree with Alison it works better in black and white. I would be tempted to give it a bit more exposure - I don't think (at least on my monitor) there is very much "white" in the image. Also perhaps crop a touch off the left hand side. What do you think? Mar 15th
40 Mar 20 Comment Yes, very atmospheric. Maybe that's was the effect you were aiming for, but I don't think that, apart from the figure, anything is sharp or in focus. The softness at the top of the dune at the left and right I find strangely uncomfortable - but that's just me. Have you another version of this image that is sharper? Mar 15th
40 Mar 20 Comment Yes a good attempt and it does look cold. Especially like the mist effect.
My only comment is I find the branches of the bush/tree too prominent - I am trying to look beyond that to Lake Superior and the bush is in the way. Perhaps a viewpoint bypassing that would be even more effective. 		Mar 15th
40 Mar 20 Comment I agree its soft but that comes with the weather and time of day. Perhaps it could do with a touch more vibrance and contrast, though. I think the reflections are pleasant and the triangular tree behind the bird is interesting.
Have you thought of cropping off the right hand side and making it more of a square? That would put the pelican more on a third and slightly larger in the frame. 		Mar 15th
40 Mar 20 Comment You've caught the atmosphere of a workout very well and have applied this technique very effectively. Only comment is the toe of the blue shoe has been cropped out (maybe not important) and I think overall the image is a touch underexposed and giving it +1.5 stops might be better. Mar 12th
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