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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Appreciate. |
Dec 29th |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
I am not convinced by the sky but love the bottom portion of this image. I would be tempted to chop off the top part to leave a "letter box" sized image. I also like Mark's version too though. |
Dec 22nd |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Yes, I wondered about a gentle crop at the top; I like both the coloured and mono versions equally. |
Dec 22nd |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Yes, I wondered about a gentle crop at the top; I like both the coloured and mono versions equally. |
Dec 22nd |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Yes, I wondered about a gentle crop at the top; I like both the coloured and mono versions equally. |
Dec 22nd |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Really nice effect. |
Dec 22nd |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Looks good, nothing I wish to contribute. |
Dec 22nd |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Splendid effect and the border is a neat touch. My only suggestion would be to slightly lighten this as, overall, it's a bit dark, at least on my monitor. |
Dec 22nd |
18 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Thanks, I'll have another look at making the faces clearer. |
Dec 22nd |
9 comments - 0 replies for Group 18
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40 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Overall it looks a bit too dark to me, I wonder if it would be better somewhat lightened. I think most people have tried this sort of picture - the suggestion to turning it upside down is a good one. I think it would have been better next time to include some reflections of brighter coloured objects perhaps something red. Just a thought. |
Dec 22nd |
40 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Yes, good that you are trying something new and with some success. Keep experimenting but be careful of your eyesight! The image makes it clear how minute Mercury is in comparison to the Sun. |
Dec 22nd |
40 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
This is an interesting subject and I can quite see why you wanted to have another go at it. The flat lighting makes this a challenging subject to photograph, though. To me the road looks curved, maybe lens distortion which should be improvable in LR or PS would be helpful. Is the camera also slightly tilted upwards? Also, is there a touch of yellow at the bottom left hand side which could be cloned out. I would be tempted to remove the sky which doesn't add anything IMHO and also crop off the grey boxes at the left and right sides.
The others all have useful suggestions. |
Dec 22nd |
40 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
The woman in the foreground is very good and makes a very lively image. I think cloning out or toning down the bright lights in the background is a definite improvement. |
Dec 22nd |
40 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
I think Moira's suggestion is very elegant and suits the subject very well. |
Dec 22nd |
40 |
Dec 19 |
Comment |
Thanks, appreciate your thoughts. I'll look at these points. |
Dec 4th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 40
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15 comments - 0 replies Total
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