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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Yes super effect but I like Ian's Very much too.
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Jun 26th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I did consider that but that would mean losing the tattooed hand
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Jun 26th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Yes, less distracting. A nice green too. |
Jun 17th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I didn't realise one could rent these chairs. I think this works OK, but as the others mention I think better to straighten the horizon and lighten the hand - Peter's version really works for me. |
Jun 17th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Very creative and a good result.
I just wonder if one needs the background to the frames - it makes it a bit overcomplicated. |
Jun 17th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Nice treatment which works well and good to remove the distracting background. |
Jun 17th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I like the idea , agree with the others about positioning and allowing a bit more space. The colour is perhaps strange but acceptable - it certainly stands out. |
Jun 17th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I like the darkened sky pastel colouration effect, and this works well with the subject.
The only negative for me (which I agree is not important) is the fact the tractors are all sloping, presumably because they are not on flat ground. Nothing you can do about and it doesn't matter! I must get out more. |
Jun 17th |
18 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Thanks I wondered about cropping some of the arm at the bottom off. |
Jun 12th |
9 comments - 0 replies for Group 18
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40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I would prefer that the blue players didn't overlap but had distance between them. |
Jun 28th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
A second look and I feel the pink tulip is confusing. |
Jun 28th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Yes, nice composition and you have done well to improve the detail in the roadway. Pleasant sky and trees.
Would someone walking over the bridge near the vanishing point be an improvement? Also, maybe a different viewpoint would have made this a more interesting picture? One has to look closely to realise this is actually a trestle bridge; perhaps a view from the side (i.e. from down the valley) or looking down from above would have been better. I appreciate this may not have been possible at the time though. Hope this helps. |
Jun 17th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
You've done a good job toning down the background rose but it might have been better to have positioned the camera so there wasn't anything distracting in the background in the first place!
I think that the background is rather too dark (some people use a portable reflector to lighten this.
Good to attend courses, these can help focus on different aspects of photography. |
Jun 17th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I agree with Henry, to leave the foreground streetlights in.
Lovely atmospheric picture, nice colours, has depth to it. The clouds add to the ambience.
A couple of points, I think maybe you may have tilted the camera slightly and the two pylons on either side don't looks straight to me. This could be adjusted using the vertical slider in LR. Also there are a few spots in the sky which could be easily cloned out. I think you may need to think about getting your DSLR sensor cleaned. |
Jun 17th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
This is so creative, Henry. A nice attractive effect, works well. The shapes are so interesting.
My feeling is that the reflection green at the bottom is too unreal and would be better if a more natural colour but that's personal taste.
I would like to learn how you did this. |
Jun 17th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Nicely taken, good positioning of the two characters. Good lighting. It would have been so much better in colour! |
Jun 17th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
yes I wondered about the red lines. |
Jun 14th |
40 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Yes, I think the camera was actually focussing behind the two front players. I'm going to have another go on a better day. |
Jun 11th |
9 comments - 0 replies for Group 40
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18 comments - 0 replies Total
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