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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
18 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Welcome to the group.
Very nice treatment of the image, the sort of picture you could continue to get all creative on for hours.
I think it is overall a bit too dark, I am happy with your choice of the crop. |
Jan 21st |
18 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Great picture. Maybe a light crop but not much needed. |
Jan 21st |
18 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Fun picture. Only comment, would it be better to have the child slightly larger in the frame? |
Jan 21st |
18 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Looks like a ghost - well done! Only comment is I think the background needs a bit of tidying up. |
Jan 21st |
18 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Its a question of personal taste but I tend to prefer the original silhouette of the trees. I think the enhancement of the sky is fine and I quite like the grain effect. |
Jan 21st |
18 |
Jan 18 |
Reply |
I am not sure there is an actual lean to the right, the pier columns look vertical. |
Jan 21st |
18 |
Jan 18 |
Reply |
Thanks for that.
I wondered if the top right hand corner area was a bit light. |
Jan 12th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 18
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40 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
I appreciate it is very difficult to take good "street" photographs, especially when people are no happy about being photographed. |
Jan 27th |
40 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Well done going out in the snow! Nicely seen and you've done a great job in lightening the image and keeping the detail in the snow. My real problem with this is the eye is lead to the back wall but the graffiti these isn't very exciting (+ there are some prominent notices?) so my eye wanders around the rest of the image - mainly to the right hand side.
Henry's crop I think is an improvement, it might be worthwhile experimenting with straightening the converging verticals too |
Jan 21st |
40 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Nice capture, the exposure looks fine to me. I think it would benefit from having someone on the path as an added point of interest. Otherwise OK. |
Jan 21st |
40 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Nicely captured image. I too feel the brownish effect isn't quite right. I've had a quick play adding a bit of green, which I think is maybe better. What do you think? |
Jan 21st |
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40 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
I like the overall effect but feel it is a pity the hull and the reflection of the hull have merged together. |
Jan 21st |
40 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Unfortunately I cannot include any more sky, there is none; my initial cropping was to remove some watery foreground. I much prefer Henry's cut on this image. Thanks |
Jan 21st |
40 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
You have kept the detail in the snow but I think it is slightly too grey. I agree with Curtis, the woman is in the wrong place (and looking out of the frame). Maybe better to crop to concentrate on the tree and flags. |
Jan 21st |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 40
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12 comments - 2 replies Total
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