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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Feb 24 |
Comment |
Good flow to the image as the children sled down the curve of the bird's feathers. Maybe a slight shadow is needed under the sled. I agree that the second bird needs something to anchor it better. |
Feb 23rd |
| 34 |
Feb 24 |
Comment |
You have created a well composed image, Jan. Three items in the hand are perfect. I do think a palm tree would have been a better choice. It would have simplified the image. Did you consider flipping the image? |
Feb 23rd |
| 34 |
Feb 24 |
Comment |
Good use of color and lines. Quite an interesting piece. |
Feb 23rd |
| 34 |
Feb 24 |
Comment |
Good work, Frans. Your light painting of the dancers works quite well. I agree with Mike that the dancer on the right is outstanding. The dancer on the left is not as well lit and not as sharp. However, I don't think it should be cropped out. She makes a good background for the dancer on the right. A stroke always works to separate the image from the background. |
Feb 23rd |
| 34 |
Feb 24 |
Comment |
Gunther, This is a really nice job. As Jan said the overlay of the clouds works very well. I think I would have made the vignette at the top and bottom of the sun less intense to let more of the edge show. And I agree with Jan that the tail feathers need to be included , and the orange spot should be white on the wing. |
Feb 23rd |
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