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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Reply |
Hi Helen,
I probably used Edit/Transform/Perspective (or Warp) to get the door straight; can't remember for sure. Per Candy's comment, I have fixed the ghosting that Clarity had introduced. It is amazing how most photographers will notice such issues and once you see them, they jump out at you! |
Jun 25th |
| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Neat and well done composite image though I would second Steve's suggestion for blue flowers. And "Time Flies" would be enough for the title. |
Jun 17th |
| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Interesting geometry but given your title, I would want to see more tunnel and to move the "goal" of the road further up in the frame. I could not warp the image towards that end, so I made a duplicate, scaled it down, moved it up in the frame, gave that layer the hard light blend mode, used a mask to bring back the lower parts of the bottom layer, and with the "new" Nik/DxO Color Effects, added a vignette to simulate a tunnel. As for the title, I don't see much brick, so how about "Yellow Journey"? |
Jun 17th |
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| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Jan's changes help a lot but even there, more dramatic and less flat lighting is needed. |
Jun 17th |
| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Your message is an important one but having (to me) just the one obvious but confused piece of debris is too subtle. The water is too blue and the flower too "sunny" to convey the problem and conflict with your title. |
Jun 17th |
| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Gorgeous and sensual. As for the flipping, I agree that lower left to upper right may feel more natural to Western eyes, but your approach says "here is something unusual - look." Stick with it. |
Jun 17th |
| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Very neat image. Only change I can suggest is a graduated neutral density from the top to make the hat less bright which distracts a bit for me from her neat face. |
Jun 17th |
| 34 |
Jun 18 |
Reply |
Thanks Stephen,
I appreciate your interest in a good title. For now, my favorites are either "Journey Blue" or "Blue Journey." |
Jun 15th |
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