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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Jan's size changes really help. But even with Georgians's and Candy's color changes, the lady does seem lost in the flower. Maybe really change the flower (solarize?). In any case, the power of your imagination in merging images is impressive. |
Jun 24th |
| 34 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
I too like the idea of black on black. Well done. Does a print work as well for you as what you see on the screen? In spite of using a calibrated monitor and paper profiles, I am amazed at how often a print looks different - sometimes better, sometimes worse - than on the monitor. |
Jun 24th |
| 34 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Thanks for all your comments. At the least, I am tempted to make the 'skier' move evident. I will have to keep the result in mind as I work on other photos. But as is (with a hint of skier), it was the tonal range that interested me. Maybe I should make that stronger. Or perhaps if I stretched one way out of a square format, it might work better. |
Jun 24th |
| 34 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Yes, the bird needs to be moved a bit to the right. Also, I am not sure you need the texture on the foliage and trees. I like the asymmetry you added in the interior lighting. |
Jun 24th |
| 34 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Your result is good. But even more than Steve, I would like the eye to be more evident. The pattern in the background makes me wonder if you made the shot through a window screen; the pattern is too regular. |
Jun 24th |
| 34 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
I agree with all the comments - you have created a very neat image. The different directions of the lighting, flowers vs. the girl, did get my attention. The head of the bird seems not as in focus as the nearby flowers. And I would consider making all 6 of the flying birds white doves. |
Jun 24th |
| 34 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
This is a very imaginative result. I do find her nose to be too detailed and not a compliment to her; it is too dominant. |
Jun 24th |
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