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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
You've created an excellent frame here, and it suits the portrait of your granddaughter very well.
I agree with Jan about the flower faces - once you've seen them they leap out. I've used the clone stamp and spot healing brush to hide them. I also found the sharp edges above her head a bit distracting, so I added some petals.
Just my personal preferences - I think your image is an excellent composition which works well. |
Sep 7th |
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| 34 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
A fine composite. The elements come together well. I the spirit of "back to school" I think the book is perfect and contrary to Steve W's comments, I think the blend of the skyline and book is good.
For a vignette I like to use Filter > Lens Correction in custom mode - easily controllable and very quick. |
Sep 7th |
| 34 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
I like this. You've made the bee seem much more menacing.
I couldn't resist having a play with it - I placed Original 2 over the final image in Luminosity mode (70% opacity), stamped up then used Quad Pencil to bring the texture up a little. |
Sep 7th |
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| 34 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
An excellent series of images, although I agree it's not really in the spirit of altered reality. This could be attained by using a texture to tie all the frames together, which is what I've done, then used Nik Viveza to bring back the contrast.
I believe a 5 panel series of frames is called a pentaptych |
Sep 7th |
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| 34 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
I really like this image. I agree with you aboutthe colours and textures - they're superb.
I agree with Steve W that it could be brighter. I've used Nik Viveza to warm it a little and brighten it - just my preferences. Your work is excellent. |
Sep 7th |
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| 34 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
You've created an excellent image here. Your treatment works well.
I like the additions you've made, but I have to agree with Steve W about the bird - it looks a bit garish for the image. I've toned it back a bit: |
Sep 7th |
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