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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 28 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
I like the way you cropped your picture, it looks much better this way. I would work a little more on the exposure of the entire picture, maybe decrease the highlight slider and increase the shadow slider in LR, and then make the boats really pop out with the Curve section in the Develop Module. |
Jul 26th |
| 28 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
I like the composition and exposure, a perfect example of leading line composition. The seagulls are okay but it would be fine without them, too. |
Jul 26th |
| 28 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
A great photo and I like how the building and grass turned out with the line and ink process. I feel the smoke and sky is a little bit over processed and would tone the processing down a bit. |
Jul 25th |
| 28 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
When I first learned Photoshop many years ago, I experimented combining two or more photos a lot. It was time consuming and caused me to stay up late trying different versions/techniques. Your photo inspires me and maybe I'll try it again. I like the way the flag contrasts with the white fireworks on the right side but experiment with the left and make it a bit more saturated so that it matches the intensity on the right. |
Jul 25th |
| 28 |
Jul 18 |
Comment |
I love this picture and the composition and exposure is perfect. |
Jul 25th |
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