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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 28 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
I like the natural light as it goes with the vintage look. You could also try making it into more of a square format so that one's eye goes right to the model and not hood of the airplane. |
Jan 15th |
| 28 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
I like how everything is in sharp focus from her face to the bolts on the wall. I wouldn't change anything--it's a good photo. |
Jan 15th |
| 28 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
This is an interesting picture and I think the main focal point is the door and brick around it. I would either eliminate some of the white portion on the right or make it darker to match the door intensity. The paintery effect works well with this photo. |
Jan 15th |
| 28 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
I'm impressed with your technique in doing this. The textures and colors in the bubble are beautiful and the darker orange on right side enhance the bubble more than the lighter colors on the left side. I would increase the tonality of the left side to match the right side or else the reverse, lessen the darker orange to match the other side. |
Jan 15th |
| 28 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
I like it as a BW but not sure if I like all the graininess. I would try it with less grain around his face and beard so that his face would look more realistic. The grain on the rest of him adds to the antiquity of the character. |
Jan 15th |
| 28 |
Jan 18 |
Comment |
Here is a picture of the floral centerpiece that got in the way. |
Jan 13th |
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