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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Reply |
New version below. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Reply |
See below my new version. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Reply |
See another effort posted below. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
The images are well combined but I have to agree with Jim about the placement of the runner, he is just too near the edge.
I think I saw you earlier Bike shot gaining acceptace or was it an award in a recent international. Well done. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
DO like the treatment but the positioing of the tractor bugs me especially as it appears we have lost some of the front wheel. Moving it up a little would emphasise that it is hidden in the vegetation and not cropped off. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Removing sheep so three remain was a good choice. As you know I do a lot of similar images aiming for a painterly effect so the technique appeals to me. Would you consider just reducing the opacity of the Topaz layer just to allow a little of the original detail to be revealed. I think that might also address David's comment on the bridge. Worth a try. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Excellent colourful piece of work. I especially appreciate the way you have balanced the blooms, just as you would if creating a panel of prints. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
I think the treatment in Topaz works quite well. Having got to this stage I would have cosidered a few further tweaks, first to erase the texture over the word Truth on the near cheek and to do the same for the eyelashes which are so obvious in the original. |
Oct 10th |
18 |
Oct 21 |
Comment |
Thanks for all you comments and suggestions. Here is another version. But I struggled to create a flag Mike. any ideas how to do this folks. |
Oct 7th |
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6 comments - 3 replies for Group 18
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6 comments - 3 replies Total
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