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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
18 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
A super shot which immediately appealed to me. My only suggestion is that you should reduce the girl's profile so that it fits the glass of the lens. |
Jan 13th |
18 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
I feel that in your cropping you have eliminated the wrong bits. For me a square crop would have allowed you to remove the trees on the right but retain the water at the lower edge. That would have given more depth to the image.
And still add a moon. |
Jan 13th |
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18 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
Your original version I see almost as stained glass and it appeals to me, for it's stong shape and bright colour, even though the bird is centrally placed.
Your new version is very different and perhaps better balanced in composition with the bird much smaller but still very important.
On balance my vote goes to the original. |
Jan 13th |
18 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
Well thought out and colourful. I do feel that you need to do quite a lot of work on the backround where there are lots of distracting black spots. |
Jan 13th |
18 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
Your treatment works well. I would keep the red tape which brightens up the image but would remove red from the tree which is rather distracting.
If you remove the tape then you need a different title. |
Jan 13th |
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