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Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
I loved this shot as soon as I saw it. To me it looks like a poster which is advertising a dance performance and the two layers are blended so well. Yes Mike has spotted that black streak on the face and I'm sure you can deal with that. Great work. |
Jan 14th |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Amazing result from your original - but you didn't tell use anything about your manipulation technigue - perhaps like me you forget to note down the various steps. To achieve what Mike suggests you might try to select the bird and the place a thick black stroke around it - worth a try. |
Jan 14th |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Great to have you with us in DD18 and a great image for your first offering.
Your building project combining varied selections works pretty well, although I would have tried to exclude the bit of folige which shows in the centre. It is a great sky but I see a few pink blothes which again I would consider renoving.Worth just a little more work I think. |
Jan 14th |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Twelve attempts to get it right! but you were rewarded for your persistence. Love the whacky colour produced from you frost pic. The branch {with it's alder cones?) does really need to be stark and dark to be an effective foil to the colours so I feel you have it just right. |
Jan 14th |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Amazing what you can achieve with just simple props and good imagination. My only suggestion would be for you to flip one of the three siler paper clips so they do not all face in the same direction. |
Jan 14th |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Reply |
Thanks for that idea Jennifer - I will give it a try. |
Jan 14th |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Reply |
Yes I like the original too, but concious that many might feel that all I was doing was to photograph someone elses art work, I strove to put my own interpretation on it hence my mono attempt. |
Jan 14th |
18 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Very impressionistic and I feel it works well but agree that the mono version is the better of the two. In the colour one it is that green streak whick I find a little overwhelming. |
Jan 14th |
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6 comments - 2 replies Total
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