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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 1 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I think that you have done a great job in capturing, such a glorious setting sun. It is a pity about the bald sky on the left. May, I suggest cropping off 2 inches of this, so that there is more emphasis on the golden colours. You could even crop a snippet off the top. |
Aug 5th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 1
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| 5 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I did not realise that this was a black and white copy. I have used the color variations in photoshop to change B & W pics before. There are six variations and they can be used in various ways, to change or re-color mono pics and others as well. |
Aug 10th |
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| 5 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
This in a faded black and white, looks uninteresting to me. How about going into photoshop color variations, where you can play with reds,greens and blues, darken and lighten, to produce an entirely different approach. |
Aug 7th |
2 comments - 0 replies for Group 5
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| 19 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Hello Carroll. I think what you have done, has brought out her expression. It tells a storey and makes us wonder what she has seen. |
Aug 15th |
| 19 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Interesting! Makes me think of yesteryear. The bricks were probably red, so hoe about coloring the bricks to make the hobby horsee stand out. or even coloring it all red |
Aug 15th |
2 comments - 0 replies for Group 19
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| 20 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I like the final model, because it has more impact.
Superlative! Even the model in the front has a pleasing little smile. |
Aug 15th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 20
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| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
By contrast, here is a copy of a model I took on a shoot near Lake Vernwy in Wales UK. I call it Rachel on the Rocks, and it has had two accepts at internationals, as yet. |
Aug 17th |
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| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Another thought. If you clone out the planes and their darker smoke trails. Would the picture mean something different without them ?
How about also colouring it all blue perhaps ?
How many of you see the ghostlike figure leaning across from the right ? There is also a cuddly toy rising up in the centre.
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Aug 15th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
You were lucky to have been there on a clear day. I like the way in which the cone like shape of the roots have been caught.
It all makes a lovely shape. May I suggest cropping a quarter of the bald sky off the left to give more attention to the trees. Another thought. If you crop just round the tree to remove the reflection in the water, you get a different picture, which, funnily enough, is more clear. |
Aug 14th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Thanks Dave. It sounds awesome. Would you send one of the ladies with me to hold my hand. |
Aug 14th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
The smoke trails show the antics of the planes before the final upserge |
Aug 12th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Adding the filter has improved the detail of the vases, but some of this is lost by adding the white border. Depends on what you want. |
Aug 11th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
To get rid of the shadows, you could use small versions of the clone tool. I still prefer, the more natural body colors of the original |
Aug 8th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I see that you are adding a touch of mystery by including that border. If you cup your thumb and forefinger and look through the hole, to cancel the border, you will see that the objects and leaves are sharper as, as if by magic. |
Aug 7th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
An interesting picture of some of the body lines. It is interesting that the ears are pointing in different directions. This is typical for when they are in open habitat, they have to keep alert because of possible danger. |
Aug 7th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
This makes a lovely picture with so many gulls. They are everywhere. May I suggest cropping the left so that the tree there is on the edge of the frame, matching the one on the right. Then remove some of the bald sky by cropping the top to just above the aerial. |
Aug 7th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
This takes me back to my Wartime flying training with the US Navy, where I was sent by the British Royal Air Force. Primary training was on Boeing Stearman biplanes, which included airobatics like this. I can still remember how to do a snap roll. |
Aug 7th |
| 23 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
The pose is typical and shows her quite well.
Pity about the unsuitable lighting, because there are shadows under her breast, elbow, groin and bottom. |
Aug 7th |
12 comments - 0 replies for Group 23
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18 comments - 0 replies Total
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