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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Good lesson how light skimming the surface of the road bring out the fascinating surface of the roadway. I just attended a lecture about painting with light and this was one of the speaker's ideas about light. Very nice picture. |
Nov 26th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
You could always make a severe crop so that only the man's head and top pigeon would be included. This would eliminate many distracting elements. |
Nov 26th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I see this as two stories. The feminine mother is engaged talking with the masculine shopkeeper and his worry beads. The second story is the reaction of the girl to the resting dog. I like both stories. Cutting off the back people tells me the main story is the girl and the dog. |
Nov 26th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I like the hands in the picture. They add a sexy element which makes the subject more menacing. Also with the hands the girl is more off center. Flash enhances the picture without appearing artificial. Good job. |
Nov 26th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Interesting choice of subject to be framed. The lady looks very monochromatic with no glamour. The lipstick holders seem to be offering her color and glamour. You could make a circular crop to eliminate the distracting elements. |
Nov 26th |
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