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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 23 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Certainly remove the yellow leaf. I find the blue in the water very distracting. Could you try reducing the blues a little? |
Nov 20th |
| 23 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
You've got the lighting just right and the water is lovely, Having no sky to distract improves the picture, |
Nov 20th |
| 23 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I agree with Shirley - it would be much improved if you could darken her face a little. Otherwise a lovely composition |
Nov 20th |
| 23 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I think it looks a little dull. I opened it in Camera Raw and adjusted the white and blacks. In some ways Iceland is very colourful. Is this an improvement? |
Nov 20th |
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| 23 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Tried cropping it a little while leaving the flower off centre. Any thoughts? |
Nov 20th |
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| 23 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Hi,
I think you've missed the point that I have put a texture on the image which alters the reality of the picture. |
Nov 20th |
| 23 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I'm not sure that you need quite so much space around the animal. Don't make it central, but you could lose a little on the left.
Nice amusing capture. |
Nov 20th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 23
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| 72 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Hi Adrian, Glad you are enjoying the South of England after your move. Great capture, |
Nov 20th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 72
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6 comments - 2 replies Total
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