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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Jan 23 |
Comment |
Great improvement. Especially the bird. The large branch
on left could use some sharpening. |
Jan 8th |
| 54 |
Jan 23 |
Comment |
It is almost a 'less is more' image. Very strong impact.
I still think there should be a 'destination' for the bird.
Maybe nothing more than some light in the trees.
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Jan 8th |
| 54 |
Jan 23 |
Comment |
Wow, those Greenwich Village events. I love the idea that the painter is ignoring the model and, I assume, painting from his memory. Very creative. Also, using color only on the painting and leaving the other two characters gray adds to the impact. |
Jan 8th |
| 54 |
Jan 23 |
Comment |
Beautiful composition. My only suggestion is to darken the surfboard. I completely missed it at my first view |
Jan 8th |
| 54 |
Jan 23 |
Comment |
Another interesting creation using blurred parts. I would suggest leaving all the tree branches sharp or very slightly
blurred and blurring Sunray, the bird and the background. It
would add depth to the image.
You might have to move the bird slightly. Right now the blurred bird head is in front of sharp tree branch. |
Jan 8th |
| 54 |
Jan 23 |
Comment |
A very creative use of Lensbaby, Filters and HSL(I had to
look up what that is). You have proved that blurred images can be beautiful.
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Jan 8th |
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