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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
Great composition. Leading lines pointing to the house. I like the way you curved the footprints. Perhaps the cloud is the
'Little White Cloud that Cried' that Johnny Ray sang about in the fifties. |
Jul 18th |
| 54 |
Jul 20 |
Reply |
Thank you Alan. I understand the 'Surrealism engender a disequilibrium in the viewer' definition. It is the opposite to a clean, easy to understand story. |
Jul 11th |
| 54 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
I agree with the comments about the background. Maybe it should have less strong color so it fades when compared to monkeys. Otherwise the monkeys are well transferred and situated.
How did the waves turn into a webbing? |
Jul 10th |
| 54 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
Perfectly composed and sharp. To me it tells a story. He was hoping she would go to the bench so he could join her. She decided otherwise.
You answer to Kathy aroused my curiosity about surrealism.
I searched it on the web. Alan, what is your definition of surrealism? |
Jul 10th |
| 54 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
Great composition. I think the spider is on the outside of the vase and he does not have long to live.
The original spider is much sharper than the one on the vase. |
Jul 10th |
| 54 |
Jul 20 |
Comment |
Interesting idea. I love the brick color. Either the people or the houses thru the doorway are the center of attraction.
I would chose the houses and would make them lighter and sharper. Also the blue bottom of the entryway is confusing. |
Jul 10th |
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