Activity for User 274 - Aavo Koort - aavokoort@cox.net

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54 Feb 20 Comment 'Back to the Future'. I like the two lighted areas separated by the black trees but united in subject matter. The sky is beautiful. I agree moving the car lower and left to stay in the red cloud stream.
The two red light lines are important but I feel the lower line should be closer to pavement, thinner at left and ending in the cars. The upper red line should also get smaller going left. The short red linen confuses me.		 Feb 11th
54 Feb 20 Comment A very interesting composition. What is the boy thinking?
He is not looking at the woman as he is in original 1. As a chess player I understand what you have done with the pieces.

I always look at shadows. The light for the apple, that seems to be floating, comes from a slightly different direction than the light for the boy even though they are quite close.

I admire your creativity.

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54 Feb 20 Comment Very original composition. I think the girl and the bird could be sharper. Feb 11th
54 Feb 20 Comment Thanks for your comments. As we all know judges can be 'strange'. I entered this image in our monthly club creative composition and received a low score. Go figure. Feb 11th
54 Feb 20 Comment Beautiful play with colors. I agree with Alan on 'Less is more' but I would eliminate the paint can and place the bird on the window sill. Add just some color patches on the bird to identify it as the painter. At my first glance I thought the bird was holding an arrow. Perhaps the head of the brush should be a little larger. Feb 11th
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