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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 13 |
Nov 25 |
Reply |
The falling title mainly relates to the falling leaves and the connection to the fallen, that is, the dead.
The graves are built on a mound or, at least, the ground has raised and moved here thus giving the stones an uneven look. |
Nov 12th |
| 13 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
The edited version shows more definition and colour in the sky. Very moody, as you say. I would have liked to see the very top of the central wall though, even if we cannot see (or need to see) all of the wall on the far left. Nice composition allowing us to see more gravestones and the distant hills in the background. |
Nov 12th |
| 13 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
It's interesting to see so much writing on the headstone. You usually only get the basic information of names and dates, and a short quote/memory. The colours of the headstones look realistic although the grass looks a little too green, especially towards the back. |
Nov 12th |
| 13 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
I love the bottom half of this image - the rusted fencing shown against the white stone, the tops of the graves showing crosses and figures. I appreciate that you wanted to show the whole of the cross of the main tomb, but I feel that you could have cropped from the base of the that column, just above the writing. |
Nov 12th |
| 13 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
The pop of colour works well although you could have toned down the pieces of paper, so that they weren't so bright and thus distracting. I do like the angle that you have shot from and the different shapes you have captured. It shows how populous this place is. |
Nov 12th |
| 13 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
Personally, I cannot see any difference between the Before and After images.
Unfortunately, for me, the headstones in the foreground look a little over-exposed. I do like the fact that you have captured the image with the flags off-centre and having the colourful bush in the background. |
Nov 12th |
| 13 |
Nov 25 |
Comment |
I recognise that piece of floor. I agree with Gene that another view would have shown its context but would also have shown the whole plaque. The colour looks very faithful though. |
Nov 12th |
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