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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 10 |
Mar 25 |
Reply |
Hi Doug, Yes, this is an improvement! The iceberg is more centered and dominant in this revision. Thanks! |
Mar 20th |
| 10 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
I find that the muted earth colors and detailed water currents in your image make for a captivating scene. I agree with Peter that a slight crop from the top will improve the image. Though I'm aware that 2 subjects in an image usually does not make for a winner, in this case the 2 bushes are so different in form that I think it works here! |
Mar 20th |
| 10 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
I love making montages (fun work for a rainy day), and you have a lot of great starting material here with which to work! Your revision of the image with Meredith's suggestions improved the layout. For what it's worth, here are some more suggestions:
1 - Have the angel above Allison sitting on the very top of the mushroom.
2 - Add a new mushroom to the right side of the image by cloning the toadstool from lower left: Select the toadstool, place on a new layer, modify size, etc. with the Transform command, and move to the right-side background.
3 - Add an angel looking down from the upper right corner. Clone the upper left angel in the same manner as for the mushroom. Flip it horizontally so that it is looking down on Allison.
Continue to have fun! It's a work in progress! |
Mar 20th |
| 10 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
I find the orchid room at Longwood to be a constant source of photogenic floral subjects! Here, your use of a polarizing filter helped by eliminating possible hot spots. And the sharpness and well-controlled exposure brought out texture in the blossoms. |
Mar 20th |
| 10 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
A very harmonious image - what comes across immediately is how the background color palette complements the colors of the flower! Other than the very back edges of the flower being slightly soft, I see no other technical flaws. |
Mar 20th |
| 10 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
Since you captured only a detail of the original Cezanne, this image stands on its own as your personal abstract. I Googled the complete Cezanne painting and discovered that your image is not only a small part of it but that you flipped it horizontally! Nicely done! |
Mar 20th |
| 10 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
I agree - well-done iPhone capture of a city skyline! Nicely composed and cropped, as well. |
Mar 20th |
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