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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 10 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
A compelling image and - let's face it, now I 've got to buy a teleidoscope! I like how the different colored stripes of the shower curtain fade into each other. I do find that the yellow target at lower right tends to take my eye out of the scene. I find that the upper half of the image is visually more interesting, and you might try cropping up halfway and a bit from the right to obtain this "picture within a picture"! |
Sep 24th |
| 10 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Your revisions did a lot to remove distractions and warm up the image. However, I think you should be commended for the camera angle you used to shoot both images. We view the plane from behind and it appears to be ready to fly off into the rising sun! |
Sep 24th |
| 10 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Well-done as regards sharpness, color and lack of blemishes! I agree increasing brightness and/or contrast slightly would make it perfect. |
Sep 24th |
| 10 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
Your scenic certainly captures the vast spaces of the Far West, and the clouds add drama to the view! You might try adding a bit more contrast using the Dehaze slider in LR - this should make the clouds stand out more. Also try increasing the color temperature to warm up the scene. Otherwise, well-done! |
Sep 24th |
| 10 |
Sep 22 |
Comment |
A nice capture of this Icelandic flower! Image detail is sharp, but I agree that it could be a bit brighter. You might also consider toning down (by burning in Photoshop) the 2 background flowers on the left side. |
Sep 24th |
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