Activity for User 249 - Mark Aksoy - maksoy@aol.com

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10 Feb 18 Comment Thank you all for your helpful comments! I could not make the people larger, but with Photoshops's help, I could move them over to the right! Feb 26th
10 Feb 18 Comment Well-done dramatic portrait!! Lighting is impeccable, particularly on the face and jacket, and shows a full range of tonalities. The gun is the secondary main subject in the scene and is also well lit, but the stock is hidden by the model's hand and jacket. I you shoot (pardon the pun!) any more of these poses, I would display the gun in its entirety. Feb 26th
10 Feb 18 Comment The passageway shows great geometry and depth! And you captured it under just the right conditions - the snow brings out the texture in the rock. I agree with John that cropping in from the right would produce a stronger image. You might also consider cloning out the black sign on the right pillar, since it can't be read and it distracts from the overall architecture. Feb 26th
10 Feb 18 Comment I basically agree with the above comments. The eye on the left bird adds a center of focus to the image. The backs of the other birds are too bright and will benefit from an added gradient or from burning in to darken their feathers. The filter combo you used, with its compelling splatter effect, is well suited to the feathery subject! Feb 26th
10 Feb 18 Comment You successfully captured some brilliant Fall colors! They stand out well against the blue sky. I also like the yellow leaves on the ground at lower left and bottom. You might consider cropping in a bit from the right to concentrate the viewer's eye on the main subject of the yellow tree. Feb 26th
10 Feb 18 Comment Image is well-exposed, sharp, and colors are vibrant. However, the flowers at bottom draw my attention away from the balcony at top, which I feel is the most interesting part of the image. I would crop way up to the bottom of the roof balcony and a little from the left to make this balcony a panorama image (see cropped image below). Feb 26th
10 Feb 18 Comment Well done! You chose the perfect backdrop - textured but not so much as to draw attention away from the soup can. The bricked-in window at left balances the can, and the can's bright red color makes it stand out. Feb 26th
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