Activity for User 245 - Barbara Mallon - bjmallon@comcast.net

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7 Jul 22 Comment I find the left hand side of the photo too busy. I would crop from theft throughout the pile of rocks on the bottom left. Then I would crop from the bottom about half way to the shadows of the branches. Steve's cropping also works. I think the branches of the main log are what you are interested in. So think of ways to emphasize them. Jul 9th
7 Jul 22 Comment Dark and gloomy. Maybe it should be a bit brighter? I think I would have composed it so the rock behind the tree is part of the composition. In other words the photographer should move to the left. Jul 9th
7 Jul 22 Comment These wide angle tunnels are certain to bring the viewer into the image. I find the neon green sign distracting. I would desaturate it and its reflection . Think I would crop from the top through the top of the highest arch to bring the viewer incloser. Jul 9th
7 Jul 22 Comment It may be over sharpened. A little less contrast may make for a more dreamy sunset. I do like the colors and the the composition. The sunset star certainly adds. Jul 9th
7 Jul 22 Reply Will do. Here is another shot that I think is perhaps better: Jul 9th
7 Jul 22 Comment Nice capture. The bat and ball are fuzzy but the batter is sharp! The only suggested improvement is to darken the fence and sign so the batter, bat and ball stand out better. Jul 9th
7 Jul 22 Comment Well done. Effective image! I like the angle and possisionong or the flower. The composting was done very well. Small nitpick: The lighting direction on the clouds is not indirect as it seems on the flower. I just took a class otherwise would not have noticed. Probably no one else will. Jul 9th
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