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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 7 |
May 22 |
Comment |
Interresting building! Is the building tipping? I agree with the first 2 that it is probably lens distortion. I would play with the perspective crop tool so all windows are vertical. It still does not look upright. I definitely like the additional lighting in Rich Sear's Comment. If you could get some detail into the black overhang on the left, it would not be so distracting. |
May 18th |
| 7 |
May 22 |
Comment |
I really like your photo. Although I liked Stuart's comments on my photo, I think additional sharpening is not right for yours. I tried cropping out the 2 buildings on the right. I think it makes a better pictorial image by eliminating a distraction and moving the tower out of dead center. Everything then points to the tower. |
May 18th |
| 7 |
May 22 |
Reply |
Thank you for your comment. I entered it in the camera club and hoped the judge would do what you did. I have tried lots of cropping but yours work best for pictorial! |
May 18th |
| 7 |
May 22 |
Comment |
I like the composition and lighting. The angle of the flower and the diagonal of the leaves bring one into the gorgeous center. The saturation is compelling but close to overdone. I think your subject calls for focus stacking. (Another photo focused on the closest petals and made Into another layer on photoshop. The sharp parts could be selected and the rest masked.). The closest edges are almost sharp but not. They should be sharp. The background needs the hot spots burned down. |
May 18th |
| 7 |
May 22 |
Comment |
OMK-1 is a film camera! Well done! All set up and well visualized. The black background offsets the flower perfectly. the exposure is perfect and the flower well placed. depth of field works too! You did it!
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May 18th |
4 comments - 1 reply for Group 7
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4 comments - 1 reply Total
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