Activity for User 245 - Barbara Mallon - bjmallon@comcast.net

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7 Sep 20 Comment I think as an image without most of the top, the reel of nets is a great image! I would darken the bits of buildings left so as not to direct attention to them. Maybe though to accomplish your objective of old vs new, looking up at the building with the nets as a smaller part of the image. The buildings should be brighter and the nets darker as well in that case. Sep 9th
7 Sep 20 Comment Excellen composition! Lovely action! The girl is properly exposed. Your worry is about the brightness of the wave, the board and the hand. Sometimes I have made two copies of an image in ACR or Lightroom. One is part of the image that is properly exposed and another is a part adjusted to be properly exposed. Then I combine them into layers in a single image in PhotoShop. Then by erasing parts of the top layer, the image is all properly exposed. If your photo was taken in RAW, there is a possibility of correction of the bright spots. Sep 9th
7 Sep 20 Comment My first thought was Oh no! It is definitely arresting. You grab attention by the juxtaposition of the the sweet looking deer on a potentially hot cooking surface. With all the wildfires here in California we worry about the deer being cooked so emotionally this is very powerful. I think it works as almost monochrome. Sep 9th
7 Sep 20 Comment You are magic the way you combined the images. It doesn't look soft to me! The foreground waves are sharp enough, the rest would be hazy because of the spray. Love the colors the placement and the angle! I see a lot of straight on photos of these sunsets at that location. This is so much better. I like it!!! Sep 9th
7 Sep 20 Comment A pattern shot. It is interesting but would be more so with an object to break the pattern at some stragetic point. Sep 9th
7 Sep 20 Comment Well done! I used to do this with film. I would only tone down the reads on te lower left corner. You could try brightening just the sky a bit more.

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