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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 4 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
A good action shot and crop Isaac. I thought the whites were too bright so off to Camera Raw. I adjusted the White slider to soften to soften that color. Thinking the image was to bland, I hit Auto, then tweaked the Contrast and Dehaze sliders then your rendering appeared to exhibit more definition. |
Apr 9th |
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| 4 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Good eye Ian, mixing old with new tells the story of progress. The image is sharp. you produced natural color and the walk way created a good leading line. |
Apr 9th |
| 4 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
I generally agree with Joe's comments Guy, it is fun and many times beneficial, to experiment. |
Apr 9th |
| 4 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
The painterly look really fits this image and the vivid flower colors create Impact. The house was canted left so I hit ctrl A ctrl T in Camera Raw to straiten it. As the others stated the left edge was burned to dark. I couldn't lighten that area so that it looked nature so I cropped the first gathering of red flowers out. That said I think it could be a wall hanger. |
Apr 9th |
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| 4 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Joe, your daughter seems to be quite adept at this artform. As Isaac stated, the image is sharp, the green dragon and myriad of additional colors make way for high impact. In addition, the many color streams provide many leading lines that should get the viewers eye well into the image. Are you going to commission Marti to produce a rendering for your home? |
Apr 3rd |
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