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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for your in depth critique Ian. This was a very special experience for me. |
Aug 22nd |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Comment |
You captured the peak of the action Thomas, it is sharp where needed and subject is properly placed on your canvas. |
Aug 20th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Comment |
The bridge walks provide leading lines, good use of rule of thirds, pleasant sky, image tells an interesting story however it should leave the viewers with questions, who are the people, what is their destination and what are they thinking. Bye the way you caught a couple kissing. Last but not least, good use of silhouettes. |
Aug 20th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Comment |
Another unusual image Joe, your artsy eye is a photographic blessing for you and the Study Club 4 members. The changes I would suggest have been covered by our elite members. |
Aug 20th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Reply |
Hi Allison,
I work with a P.C. To straiten a vertical or horizontal line, enter P.S. with the image that needs help. ctrl A then ctrl T. That will bring up marching ants then control points. Example-to level a horizon that is canted to the right, place your curser in the upper right corner then move the arrow up until it appears lever. If you need more help in fixing this problem, drag the horizontal line into the area to be straitened, then you will know exactly how high to move the mouse clicked on the upper right arrow so that the horizon will be perfect. |
Aug 17th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Reply |
I didn't crop the image as it would exclude 3 family members and I wanted to include the storm clouds as well. |
Aug 11th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for your critique Alison. If you look at my horizon line in P.S. and bring down the horizontal ruler you will find that the horizon is perfect. |
Aug 11th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for your kind words Beverly, it was moving for me making the image and watching the story unfold. |
Aug 6th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Comment |
I like the action story Ian. You used a shallow f stop so that the background was soft, you had the patience to wait until the lady looked your way and caught a good profile of her partner. The hand in the right foreground was a concern so I deleted it. The background bldgs. were canted so I hit Ctrl A Ctrl T then straitened the bldgs. verticals the best that I could, then used the paint brush with 5 pixels to soften bldg. glare. Last but not least, I used the Shadows slider in Camera Raw to darken the dancers exposed back and arm. I believe your fine image is stronger now, what do you think? |
Aug 4th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Comment |
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Aug 4th |
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| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Comment |
Your image shows a different prospective than most shots of Mormon Row. You captured the beautiful soft morning light and framed the shot perfectly between the trees. A score of 10 tells me the judges don't understand the art of photography. |
Aug 4th |
| 4 |
Aug 19 |
Comment |
A photo story well told Isaac. The subject enjoys a prominent place on your canvas, the image is tack sharp and the colors are natural. Showing the flying stone chips was a nice touch. Thanks for including the additional pix. |
Aug 4th |
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7 comments - 5 replies Total
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