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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 4 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Congrats at your success in the show Ian. I like the intimacy of your portrait. Shooting down creates another prospective. The face definition and subtilties of the clothing, in my opinion, add to the strength of your rendering. My only suggestion would to be to try using the Clone tool to block out the hot spots on the cane head. |
Aug 16th |
| 4 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I would consider your perspective on this image to be perfect Guy. The circular bannister provides a leading line that can't help viewers eyes fall right to the bottom of the bldg. and they should notice everything this image has to offer, on the way down. This rendering is tack sharp, where it needs to be, and it is blessed with striking yet relaxing color. Isaac presented a good idea in using your 12 best for a calendar. |
Aug 16th |
| 4 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Bill, this is another masterpiece. Your knowledge of L.R., P.S. and the many plug in's you have mastered gives you the aptitude to make scuttle as well as major changes to your work. I can understand that to some of our members feel that this is a little over done however I view it as your interpitation of the scene. The red color elicits impact and the building reflections create strong leading lines. My only suggestion would be to finish your vertical straitening of the Bldgs. on the right. |
Aug 16th |
| 4 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Good eye David, You have done a good job of balancing the subjects on your canvas. Good clouds and the gray sky sets off your entry. My two suggestions are: add canvas to the right side to gain more room beyond the people then bring uo NIK, if you have it, scroll down to Dfine 2. After that is finished most of the background noise should be gone. |
Aug 4th |
| 4 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Isaac, this image is spectacular. The soft pink peddles create the leading line, the varied colors bring visual IMPACT into play and to top it off the bee is razor sharp. The vignette contains your work on the canvas, bravo. |
Aug 4th |
| 4 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Another good travel image Joe, as Isaac stated, the roadway allows for a strong leading line. The 2/3rds foreground and 1/3rd background works for this rendering. Sharp where needed with good color. |
Aug 4th |
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