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C/R |
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Jan 20 |
Reply |
I worked on your image some and darkened the background water, lightened the red (brush +color dodge) on the heads of the birds. What you did was good but I'd use levels to darken the blacks to allow the birds to stand out a bit more. |
Jan 6th |
| 1 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
That's a good capture. The birds are the main subject so there is very little reason to include in the final image so much of the material to the right. Also the image appears a bit dark. |
Jan 6th |
| 1 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Beautiful scenery but I'd like to see some more of the base water. This could be easily done by enlarging the canvas and using the stamp tool to copy some of the water. Also you are not using your levels to the best advantage. You still have some contrast between the colors to achieve. The mountains in the back sky could be brought out to better advantage. |
Jan 6th |
| 1 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Nice reflection. Sharon, you live in NYC. What a great place for street photography. There is so much to see. I can image you are looking for nature, but I can't imagine passing up the scenes of the big city. |
Jan 6th |
| 1 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Yep, shapes and colors. Removal of the blue sides of the basin would help. Did you have to do any processing? |
Jan 6th |
| 1 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
I'd be interested in what you did in Lightroom. It's a nice capture of unusual birds. It might be a little more dramatic if the darks were a bit blacker. |
Jan 6th |
| 1 |
Jan 20 |
Comment |
Hi Dennis, Excuse me for being dense but I do not know how to include a revised image on the website. I thought the clouds on the right were rather blue-green and so I took the sponge tool and desaturated them. I lost the gold color but then dodged the white in the clouds to lighten it. I color dodged the hills and edge of the riverbed with a light orange and selectively sharpened the trees and a few of the clouds.
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Jan 6th |
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