Activity for User 217 - Dennis Hirning - dchirning@msn.com

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1 Dec 24 Comment I do find that there is a lot to look at here and it makes it difficult to decide what your subject might be. My eye keeps bouncing between the group on the left and the man with the goats. I think that I might crop the group off the right and maybe some off the right to position the man more toward the center of the composition.

I think that the group on the left would also make an interesting image. I would like to see all of the bicycle in that image.		 Dec 21st
1 Dec 24 Comment I like the good focus that you have throughout. The curve adds interest to the abstract net.

What would you think about boosting the saturation a little?>		 Dec 21st
1 Dec 24 Comment I like this. The colors really make it. I can see were a little dodging of the people in the background would help draw attention to the end of the leading lines moving the eye toward them. I am not sure if the group are connected to each other and visiting or if one is moving out of the way of the others. I would like to see that one with the legs in the same position as the others. Dec 21st
1 Dec 24 Comment The story element is an important part of the image. If the people weren't included it would just be a documentary image of the artwork.

I think the piece on the left side is a necessary element or if it becomes a distraction to the story.

I thought that the person on the right was a man but after Neal's comment, I think he might be correct.		 Dec 21st
1 Dec 24 Comment This is an impressive scene. I like the composition you have created with the rocky outcropping of the mountain.

I can only guess what you might have done with your images. It appears that you might have used multiple layers and then removed part of a layer to reveal the one below, such as a darkened layer with the sky on top. The halos around the mountain area seems to suggest this.

A suggestion I might have, if something like this was done, is to make a selection of the horizon to separate the mountain from the sky. This could keep any editing from bleeding between the areas. I have recently thought about changing the Opacity of a layer mask to my liking. Try to keep a little softness between the selection and the background. 		Dec 21st
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64 Dec 24 Reply Thanks John, it has been quite a while since I have looked around at your group. It seems there are some nice images in here. I can see how little spare time a person can have any more. I do 3 of those 365 Day images daily and I don't need much more to keep me for thinking about anything more. :)
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