Activity for User 217 - Dennis Hirning - dchirning@msn.com

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1 Dec 23 Comment To me, the mass of people coming down the broad stairs, yells New York to me. I like the way that Coke sign seems to run into the red of the stairs. Good capture. Dec 19th
1 Dec 23 Comment It is a good landscape even if the boat wasn't in there. I don't find the smoke especially distracting but I think it might be best to leave it there since it is too close to the boat to crop on that side and it wouldn't make that much difference to have it out of there. I might like to see the vegetation on the right lightened to show more detail. Dec 19th
1 Dec 23 Comment I think that the original works better without cutting back on the saturation. I like the contrast between the blue of the sky and the warmer colors of the hillside. The detail in the various colors of the rocks on the shore do add interest. Dec 19th
1 Dec 23 Comment The shape of the branch add interest. I really like the result of inverting the black and white tones. It really brings out the detail in the vase and makes it appear to be transparent. To me the shadows are a distraction and draw away from the simplicity of the image. I might have tried to move the vase further away from the background and tried to throw more light back on it to remove the shadows completely. Dec 19th
1 Dec 23 Comment I like that you have shown the flume along with the stream. It helps to show the purpose of the building. I also do like the composition. It does seem to lack contrast on the left side and that seems to draw my eye out of the picture. You might have tried some burning in that area or add a vignette. Some other picky things. Do you think that you really need the tree bordering the right side or could it be cropped off? It seems like the building has a little tilt to the left but with old buildings, you don't know how much it might have settled. One last thing. I wonder, since so much of the image is in the shade, could the blue tint be removed? Dec 19th
1 Dec 23 Comment You've done well inserting your critter. I like the way the sunrays lead the eye toward him. You might have tried to match the lighting on your subject to match the background. Maybe darkening him and burning in to give the appearance of the light coming from above. I did some playing around the example but they teeth needed more work especially to tone them down and remove the background between them. Dec 19th
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