|
| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 1 |
May 23 |
Comment |
This looks like it is an area where you could spend some time working it with your camera. To me it does seem a bit unbalanced with a lot of weight on the right side with all the people on that side. Could you have moved to the right to move the foot traffic more toward the left and kept the shops as the background. Maybe you could have moved to the left to make the mostly empty tables your main subject and the foot traffic your background. |
May 18th |
| 1 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Very good image of the frozen falls. I might try to bring out more detail in the snow in the foreground as well as even more color in the ice. A vignette would pull the eye away from the lighter rocks on the right side. |
May 18th |
 |
| 1 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I do think that the pattern of the shadows is interesting but I would like to see something included to draw my eye. I'm not sure what might have worked without drawing the attention away from the shadow patterns. I do agree with the other comments. |
May 18th |
| 1 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I like the way that you cropped this better than leaving it as the original. If you had moved the camera a little more to the left, to make more of a connect between your subject and the cup it might have made a difference. It is an interesting character. I would like to see a little separation between the top of the hood and the object above.
|
May 18th |
| 1 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Great action. I like the way the warm reflections in the background compliment the cool color in the splashes. In a perfect world, they would have been landing towards you to show off their faces. I do like the looks of the composition but wonder what it would look like if they would have had more room to move into. |
May 18th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 1
|
5 comments - 0 replies Total
|