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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 1 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
Normally you would want some strong center of interest for the eye to be drawn to. It isn't necessary with what you have captured here. There are many areas to study and all demand attention without distracting from the whole scene. Well done. |
Dec 27th |
| 1 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
That is quite the artwork. I was wondering what it might be like if you had moved further to the left to kind of compress the artwork and show the entire jackalope. This would make it less of a panorama. You might be able to have included 3 of the red posts in the "window". You wouldn't want to go so far that the sunlit beam would show through that "window". |
Dec 27th |
| 1 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
The walker really makes this. It appeared to be quite flat to me and I thought that increasing the contrast and adding a little vignette to help draw the viewer's eye towards the subject. I might also crop off the light on the right and the shore on the other side of the river. I worked on this a bit before I read the other's comments and it looks like we all had the same the same thoughts. |
Dec 27th |
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| 1 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
I really like this. You might try a thinner border so it doesn't draw attention away from the sun. Maybe a little cropping. I would like to see more depth of field so the lamps would be sharper. |
Dec 27th |
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| 1 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
It is a great capture. It is too bad about the eye. I doubt that even a burst could have come close to having the eye visible and the leg close to that position. |
Dec 26th |
| 1 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
I really like what you have done with this. The elements coordinate well with the music. I do agree that the arrangement of the violins might be arranged differently. You might see how it would work for you to use smaller images and arrange them together in one of the lower corners to draw more attention to the music.
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Dec 26th |
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