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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
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Oct 22 |
Reply |
That does look better to me. Great shot.
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Oct 18th |
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Oct 22 |
Comment |
I really like your subject with the food in it's mouth. Would it have been possible to move further to the right to show more of the bird? It could have been that the parents were using this branch all the time before going to the nest and you might have been able to catch one of the parents coming in with the next meal.
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Oct 17th |
| 1 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
I think that I agree with everyone. Did you happen to get a shot or two before the boat was in this position? If you could have gotten this with the balcony in front of the sail, you might have been able to crop off the bright building and given room for the boat to move into the image. |
Oct 17th |
| 1 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
The multiple colors in this really is eye catching. When I first looked at this, I thought it needed a figure somewhere behind the pallets and then I noticed that there were figures hiding in the clutter on the right side. It doesn't look like they will be moving away from that spot anytime soon.
Something that I might try would be to do a slight vignette with the figures in the lightest area and darkening the area around them. It might not be enough to really draw attention to them but it might be worth a try. |
Oct 17th |
| 1 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
The two booms that close together do create a lot of interest. You do have great composition with them leading you into the frame.
I agree that in this case that the flag would be more of a distraction than a help for you. |
Oct 17th |
| 1 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
The interesting shape and the light shining through to show the blue color inside works well. You might try positioning the iceberg along with it's reflection lower in the frame. That is something that you probably couldn't have done since distracting background probably would show, but it might be possible with some playing round by stretching the water above the ice. |
Oct 17th |
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| 1 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
I think that you have great lighting on the pinnacles. I do like how the foliage frames them. I would agree with cropping off the bright area across the bottom. I don't remember seeing this when I visited Crater Lake but I guess it has been almost 60 years since I was there. |
Oct 17th |
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