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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
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Sep 20 |
Comment |
You do have good action going on in the street. I might like to see the two in the center sharp to draw my eye into the image. You probably don't need as much at the top included. |
Sep 17th |
| 1 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I didn't realize there was a wave in the background until I read the other's comments. I don't think that it makes much difference. I do like the position of the Snipes. They don't seem to be out of focus at least at this resolution. I might do a little dodging on the birds to lighten them a bit as well as cropping off some of the wave. |
Sep 17th |
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| 1 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Well, I just had to make my attempt to sharpen it without the noise. I don't know if your shutter speed was too low but it looks like the floating things are blurred on the right side but it could be from distortion instead of motion. I would like to see all of the bottom of it. I really enjoyed seeing these things. |
Sep 17th |
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| 1 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I like the table in the top right helping to lead the eye through the image. I would like to see the top of that table complete instead of fading out with the vignette. It does seem like there is a little tilt that could be corrected easily enough. |
Sep 17th |
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| 1 |
Sep 20 |
Reply |
A stoke with a shade of gray usually works for about anything.
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Sep 17th |
| 1 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
It's a good thing that it skittered away from you. I don't know if I would have spotted it without catching some movement in my eye. The out of focus leaf helps draw attention to your subject. Since it stayed there, you might have moved slightly to your right and or down to get more of that leaf behind the critter. |
Sep 17th |
| 1 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
If I remember right, it's name is Fred. At least it looks like him. :)
You did a great job with the scan and adjustments you made. Kodachrome was great for keeping it's color. |
Sep 17th |
| 1 |
Sep 20 |
Reply |
When I saw that the antennae weren't sharp I went out to see if it was still there but it was gone. That lens was given to me by the company when I retired. I will stick the Nikon 6T closeup lens on the front of it and really get in close with even less DOF.
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Sep 5th |
6 comments - 2 replies for Group 1
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6 comments - 2 replies Total
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